07.08.08
L for love, P for poem, T for tag!
I was sick of writing about movies (Hancock sucks btw, regular superhero stuff no big thing!) for the past few days. I wanted to do something fun and thought about writing a poem, a love poem – in a very clichéd style! So here’s the deal – you get transformed to this 4th grade version of you, make the poem ultra cute and super sweet, filled with innocence and write about Love! Here’s my take on it – though it wouldn’t have changed much even if I hadn’t transformed to my younger version! 
[P.S. Everybody on my blogroll is tagged! including Reema :D]
Title: Two minutes
Give me two minutes,
Spare me two thoughts,
Remember me, I am at a far far place apart
Call me once,
Make me bounce,
Two minutes, spare me two thoughts!
Wishes come true,
Hope floats,
The days run by at pace,
And you are so so near,
Call me once
Make me bounce
Two minutes, spare me two thoughts!
The miles doesn’t matter,
And the times doesn’t matter,
The moments it is that does matter,
Call me once
Make me bounce
Two minutes, spare me two thoughts!
Friendly minutes those were,
Or should I call it love,
Soul is mine and I call it life!
Call me once
Make me bounce
Two minutes, spare me two thoughts!
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priya said,
July 8, 2008 at 3:44 pm
hey dats cute!! although a lot of bouncing goin on;-))) way to go budding wordsworth!!!!!
Reema said,
July 8, 2008 at 4:11 pm
@Sakhi see see!! now he is writing poems!!
@All The lines I could think of are
Sardi Khaasi na Malaria hua,
RJ gaya yaaro,
Isko Loveria hua
Reema said,
July 8, 2008 at 4:12 pm
@RJ pehle number exchange ab call karne ki guzarish karte hua itna lamba poem!!!!
vimal said,
July 8, 2008 at 4:25 pm
That was cute. “Call me once, make me bounce” – wow !
Sandeep R. said,
July 8, 2008 at 4:56 pm
yup, kiddy cute
and the line
‘Remember me, I am a far far place apart’ should have been ‘
Remember me, I am at a far far place apart’ ??
or am i an idiot?
smallstar said,
July 8, 2008 at 5:08 pm
Wow wow wow wow wowwww!!! ;^)
Anu said,
July 8, 2008 at 6:42 pm
Hieeeeeee
poem vadaaa pyaara hai
loved it , its very cuteeee…. did u actuallly write it fr sum1 bak then ????
Oxy said,
July 8, 2008 at 6:54 pm
Tu Toh Gaya Kaam Se….
I Will Wait For You To Recover….
Sri said,
July 8, 2008 at 7:08 pm
Sorry Buddy, Not be too harsh but u r poem sucks
Oxy said,
July 8, 2008 at 7:08 pm
Tera Beemar Mera Dil
Tera Jeena Hua Mushkil
Kare Tu Kya Ab Haaye
Sri said,
July 8, 2008 at 7:11 pm
vimal said,
July 8, 2008 at 8:12 pm
Out of context, but I just added you to my blogroll
; so peace at last, huh?
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 2:09 am
@Priya – Thanks Bhabieji
@Reema – LOl!
That’s indeed a cute poem, but you still gotto do your tag! And RJ ko koi Loveria nahi hua – it was just for kicks! 
@Vimal – Thanks Vimal! Is this poem as cute as the movie Jaane Tu?
@San – Buddy hieee!
You are right, I changed it! Thanks! 
Cute naa? 
@Smallstar – Hurray, its wow many times!
@Anu – Vada pyaara hain ya poem pyaara hain?
No, I never wrote it, before I could write it the girl was in somebody else’s arms 
FOSLA!!
@Oxy – LOL! Kya hua dost?
@Sri – Buddy, I know you want to vent out the frustation after losing 32 racquetball games (on 40) to me! Peace, peace! Calm down, I will give you a chance to win in 10 years sometime
*aaj ghar jaake khana tu banayegaa!!!*
@Oxy – BTW, my poem is like a million times better than your akthar-copied poem!
@Vimal – If you say you liked Jaane Tu, then Peace!
Nikhil said,
July 9, 2008 at 3:59 am
Hahahaha!!! Cute, indeed… Whats with you lately? Too many “cute” things you’re writing on… Are you all right? Did you fall down somewhere and hurt your head?
thanks for the tag… Will be interesting!
S said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:15 am
For me T for Two Minutes = M for Maggie
Two Mins Ruk sakte hain
Sar ke bal eh sakte hain kunki,
Badi gazab ki bhook lagi
Maggie Chhiye mujhe abhi
Before u declare me insane that was a cutsie poem am sure u had Star in Your eyes when u wrote this
Sakhi said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:38 am
@ Reems
Yes yes……..yeeeeeeessssssss! i c it all! kuchh jyadaa hi pyaar, pyaar kar raha hai aaj kal!
@ Rj
Hmmmmmmmmm… kya kaheen, aaj kal hava mein pyaar hai! pehe niks and now yu! yoohoooo!
And i am not at all good a t poems and such stuff.. am better at stories, am i allowed to write a love story, if you wish i will make it mushy mushy… pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase!
LOL (merawala! ab to maan ja!)
Poonam Sharma said,
July 9, 2008 at 5:40 am
Call me once,
Make me bounce,
I was wondering how heartfelt it is? I guess you have interesting things to tell about “she”?
Sandeep R said,
July 9, 2008 at 5:41 am
ah hmm.. effect of Jaane tu eh?
vimal said,
July 9, 2008 at 6:21 am
oh good god ! whats with you and Jaane tu? Ok, now here goes, I liked Jaane tu’s characters, not the movie. Phew!
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 6:34 am
@RJ: I have never met someone more lovely and nice than you… <3 <3
*HUGS*
Oxy said,
July 9, 2008 at 6:38 am
When did I say ur poem is bad yaar.. aise jhooth kyun bol raha hai… It indeed is cute. All I said was u r ‘beemar’ , heehaw heehaw…
wasshappening said,
July 9, 2008 at 7:26 am
I think its all Jaane tu effect…Dont worry even i am with you…
Bouncing too much in love?
The miles doesn’t matter…i liked this line…
Cute poem…
Rj,you have been getting lot of compliments from girls….whohoo!!
wasshappening said,
July 9, 2008 at 7:26 am
And how many tags??…
Ken said,
July 9, 2008 at 7:51 am
I just luvvd it….i never thought u’ll write such wonderful poems….anyways…good goin’
Iam proud of u…hehehhehhe 
NV said,
July 9, 2008 at 8:21 am
u an all rounder…..:-)
hmmmmmmmm rating 4/5
ur awesome…..
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 10:43 am
@RJ: I have thought about love, and this is the my poem. I hope you like it…
LOVE ME
“now that you’re away,
I need you,
I’m looking for something
for feel me better.
I just would want runaway
to forgive you
but that’s very impossible everytime
so I’m feeling so bitter
the only thing you can do
to make me happy is loving me
and everything that we’ll do
shall be sweet, cause we’ll do it together, you and me”
Joel said,
July 9, 2008 at 10:45 am
Wow that’s a nice poem. Really appreciate it.. Nicely written…
Reema said,
July 9, 2008 at 12:19 pm
Get a room! spare the blogosphere!
Rekha said,
July 9, 2008 at 1:16 pm
ok i have done the tag!!!
n the poem is too cute also .good one
//bounce bounce//
james said,
July 9, 2008 at 1:43 pm
@ Reems
@ RJ
take reems’ advice!
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 1:50 pm
@Nik – Thanks dude! I am alright – I’m in love season *just for kicks*
@s – Aww, that made me nostalgic! But but but you cannot get away with that poem You are tagged and you need to post your love poem soon P.S I had no one star in my eyes when I wrote this! I had the whole sky
@Saks – I am not in love ya! Infact I am a FOSLA member! (Failed One Sided Love Association ) And We all love your stories but you are not getting away with that! You need to post a love poem soon – get back to your 4th grade minds and start wrking on it. Or even better, ask your daughter to write one – that will be even more cute
@Poo – It is very heartfelt & I am a kinda guy who measures emotions I have many interesting things to tell about the imaginary *she*
@San – Maybe, but now am thinking maybe the bouncing part was the effect of Hancock
@Vimal – I think if you watch it one more time, you will love the movie too. Wat say? I really think you like the movie, don’t know why?
@Oxy – Beemar..teri toh! Tu rukk re! You wait..you are so dead!
@Bhav – I thought you like each and every line I write Bhav, the sad part part is I am just getting compliments Koi aage badd nahi raha It’s not a Jaane Tu effect – just coincidence! And as far as the tag goes, people have started writing less now, so something better than nothing, haina? I will wait to see your poem
@Ken – Thanks Ken! I write/do many wonderful things
@NV – Hieee NV School se naa I was even better in RSP 4/5??!! I will wait around next time for 5/5
@Smallstar – Your poem is very sweet! I feel it just starts abruptly – my opinion! Also, don’t add your tag in comments, it has to be a brand new post
@Joel – Thanks Joel! I think you are the 1st guy who is appreciating with less sarcasm or no sarcasm I cannot say the same things about San, Nikhil, Oxy, Vimal (tho I love those guys! *not in a gayish way*)
@Reema – Kya yaar! What did I do??!! I think someone should get a life
@Rekha – Thanks Rekha! I am ggonna check your love poem in about a minute now Cheers!
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 1:51 pm
@James – Thanks for visiting especiality! I will think about it!
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 2:02 pm
@RJ: so, must I do a post? Let me know
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 2:24 pm
@Smallstar – I think you should
Add some love pictures, add my picture, praise me 
Yea, do a post 
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 2:38 pm
@RJ: while I’ll do it, I’ll think of you. Every word will be very sweet!!
p.s. I’ll do the post 2moro!
Sakhi said,
July 9, 2008 at 3:11 pm
oooooooooooh RJ! aur tu kehta hai ki kuchh nahi hai!
tere baare meiin soch ke likhne wali hai! 
dekh reems dekh! humse jooth bolta hai!
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 3:18 pm
@Smallstar – hehe! Thanks!
@Sakhi – Phew! We are “just friends”
Reema said,
July 9, 2008 at 3:19 pm
Jhooth bole kauwa kaate kaale kauwe se dariyo
RJ Italy jayega tum sab bloggers dekhte rahiyo
Reema said,
July 9, 2008 at 3:21 pm
hum sirf dost hai- purana hindi film dialogue!!!! Infact Jaane tu was abt this only na?
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:10 pm
@RJ: *eheh*
megcloud9 said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:32 pm
pata nahin tuhe ho kya gaya hai
anyways i suck at poetry
i am so poor at it
vimal said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:34 pm
I dont think I will survive if I watch it one more time….puhleeezzzz…
harshasrisri said,
July 9, 2008 at 4:53 pm
hey man…! r u stung by any cutie…?
is it just the kick 
anyways… i haven’t done it as a tag… but i wrote a few poems and posted in my blog…. se them here plz… http://harshasrisri.wordpress.com/poems/
Amit said,
July 9, 2008 at 5:53 pm
You are not falling in love? Are you?
RJ said,
July 9, 2008 at 6:13 pm
@Reema –
Meri wali Indian hogi 
@Smallstar –
@Megs – Hieeeee buddy! You know me well to know nothing happened
– I dont care if you suck at poetry, you still gonna have to do the post and I am sure its gonna be cutest 
@Vimal – Dude, you gotto watch it one more time!
With me, I will tell you all the good things about the movie and negate all that you say 
@Amit – No yaar! *just for kicks*
vimal said,
July 9, 2008 at 6:28 pm
RJ : u know what, this is how I made most of my friends watch No Smoking. Now I know how they felt, sigh !!!!
smallstar said,
July 9, 2008 at 9:53 pm
Hi my dear friend. How are you?
my day has been very very lovely! 
*HUGS*
Nikhil said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:02 am
“Just for kicks”..??? hehehe!!! Be serious, dude… Who’s the poor girl who’s fallen for your charms!?
Sakhi said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:54 am
@ RJ
“meri waali Indian hogi” aw come on yaar, tune veer zaara nahi dekhi thi kya? pyaar ke beech mein yeh countries kahaan se aa gayi!
“just for kicks” ouch!
@ Niks
yaar, tu baaki ke comments nahi padhtaa hai kya?
NV said,
July 10, 2008 at 8:11 am
yes yes NV school se (neelam) …….
yes u were…but not better than me….
smallstar said,
July 10, 2008 at 9:58 am
I’ve done miiiiiineeeeee!!!!!
Suda said,
July 10, 2008 at 10:56 am
I am doing it now, but I am sad !!!
how to write cute and sad at a time>???
Sakhi said,
July 10, 2008 at 12:05 pm
I did the tag! U better read and don’t u dare laugh!
My desert which is always green said,
July 10, 2008 at 1:00 pm
[...] July 10, 2008 friend , life , love , me , poem , poetry So here is RJ s tag, writing a ‘love poem ‘ n make it ultra cute or ultra stupidity or whatever [...]
RJ said,
July 10, 2008 at 2:35 pm
@Vimal – No smoking! Noooooooo! U like Jaane Tu?
@Smallstar – My day just started and it’s been coming along well
@Nik – No girl
*just for kicks*
@Saks – It looks good for Veer Zaara only
@NV –
Yea yea sure! 
@Smallstar – I checked it and commented too! For the records, it was very sweet, prolly the sweetest
@Suda – Aww! I am sorry to hear that buddy! Write the poem thinking about the sweetest person in your life and by the end of it I am sure you will feel better
@Saks – Let me read it
I am not promising anything! 
Oxy said,
July 10, 2008 at 2:54 pm
Vimmuuu, I loved No Smoking.
smallstar said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:07 pm
@Raja1: I’m glad to know ittttt!!!
@Raja2: aaawwwwwwww do u really think that??? Thank u, my love!!!
RJ said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:37 pm
@Oxy – Okie, Now I know you like crazy movies!
I like “no smoking – the act” than “no smoking- the movie” 
@Smallstar1 – Thanks
@Smallstar2 – Thanks
smallstar said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:54 pm
@Raja1 e 2: LOL!
smallstar said,
July 10, 2008 at 3:56 pm
Ops! This ‘e’ means ‘and’!
vimal said,
July 10, 2008 at 4:39 pm
@ RJ : For the last time (pleaaase), I didnt like JTYJN.
and ya. I liked No Smoking so much that I downloaded a torrent version and made a good DVD of it
@ Oxy : Wow, we have similar taste for movies, I guess.
Oxy said,
July 12, 2008 at 1:27 pm
@Vimmuuu boy, Yes I feel so too.. And We have good taste , no doubt about that…:)
Nikhil Prabhu said,
July 15, 2008 at 3:52 pm
too cute man!
yep…miles don’t matter if hearts are close
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